So i went to a party on Sunday, it was the driest party cos i got there too late cos i was getting ready.Getting ready for me turns out to be a six hour affair cos i had to clean my creps and then picked out an outfit cos i cant go to a party uncoordinated . So when i get there i look the hardest .
When i get there it turns out that most of the people had left. we played playstation 4 and had a tournament on call of duty. people took it in turns to play music through the speakers. we all moved into the garden to let off some works =. it got a bit out of hand when someone from another estate came to the party with a actual gun looking for one of my boys so he shot it in the air. this made everyone sprint off including me. we jumped through the gardens across the road trying to avoid the opp boy. someone had called 5.0 so they came after us with dogs and flashlights we carried on running, there was about 10 of us. finally, we made it to a field and decided to wait it out there.
Based on true events...
Good little story , i think if you applied yourself just a little more you could add a good deal more content , just fill in a few more details like why was the gun man at the party and was is part of a gang thing and what was the outcome.. just small things that add lots to a story.
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